染雾英语作文批改评语 篇一
第一篇内容：
标题：Why Learning English is Important
字数：650
第一篇的主题是为什么学习英语很重要。文章内容充实，观点明确，结构清晰。首先，作者指出了英语是国际通用语言的事实，并且解释了这一点的重要性。其次，作者列举了几个学习英语的好处，例如可以更广泛地了解世界，可以更好地与外国人交流，可以增加就业机会等。此外，作者还提供了一些学习英语的有效方法，并鼓励读者坚持学习。总体而言，这篇文章语言流畅，观点明确，对于学生们来说是一个很好的启示。
然而，在文章中有一些语法错误和拼写错误需要改正。例如，在第二段中，"knowlege"应为"knowledge"，在第四段中，"futher"应为"further"。此外，在第五段中，"its"应改为"it's"。另外，有几个句子的表达需要改进，以使其更加流畅和自然。例如，在第三段中，"It is a language that connect people all around the world"可以改为"It is a language that connects people from all around the world"。在第四段中，"English is very widely used in many different countries"可以改为"English is widely used in many different countries". 另外，在第五段中，"Learning English also can allows you to communicate with people from different cultures"可以改为"Learning English also allows you to communicate with people from different cultures"。
总的来说，这篇文章写得很好，但还需要对一些语法错误和表达不够流畅的地方进行修正。希望作者能够在下次写作中更加注意语法和表达的准确性。继续加油！
英语作文批改评语 篇二
第二篇内容：
标题：The Importance of Physical Exercise
字数：620
第二篇的主题是体育锻炼的重要性。文章内容组织有序，观点明确，结构清晰。首先，作者指出了体育锻炼对身体健康的重要性，并且解释了这一点的原因。其次，作者列举了几个进行体育锻炼的好处，例如增强体质，提高免疫力，减轻压力等。此外，作者还提供了一些进行体育锻炼的方法，并鼓励读者坚持锻炼。总体而言，这篇文章内容丰富，观点明确，对于读者们来说是一个很好的指南。
然而，在文章中有一些语法错误和表达不够准确的地方需要改正。例如，在第二段中，"have a lot of benefits"可以改为"have many benefits"，在第三段中，"Physical exercise not only can make you stronger"可以改为"Physical exercise can not only make you stronger"。此外，在第四段中，"Furthermore, exercise also can helps you to relax"可以改为"Furthermore, exercise can also help you to relax"。另外，在第五段中，"it's important to do exercise regularly"可以改为"it's important to exercise regularly"。
总的来说，这篇文章写得很好，但还需要对一些语法错误和表达不够准确的地方进行修正。希望作者能够在下次写作中更加注意语法和表达的准确性。继续加油！
英语作文批改评语 篇三
一、 宏观性评价
1.整体印象类评语
Super！Excellent！Perfect！Wonderful！Fantastic！Marvelous！
采用整体印象类评语对于起始阶段学生有较好激励作用，但若千篇一律使用此类评语，就会使学生无法正确认识自己写作水平，最终导致教师评语失去应有作用。
2.规范导知类评语
Beautiful.Clear. Wonderful.Good hand-writing.
You’re careful of using pronunciation.
Glad to see your improvement in handwriting.
I’m expecting clearer/more beautiful hand-writing from you next time. You’d better pay more attention to word order.
Better be more careful of your spelling.
It’s important to compose a graft beforehand.
3.情感调控类评语
I appreciate your handwriting.
You have a good knowledge of English proverbs.
You are quite aware of making meaningful sentences.
You are richer than others in collecting and using typical sentences and idioms.
I’m expecting greater progress from you in writing .Come on.
If you need my help,never hesitate to come to me.
警句：
Hard work leads to success.
Not to advance is to go back.
No one is without faults.
Keeping is harder than winning.Keep it up.
二、 微观写作技能方面评语
1.专项点拨类评语
It’s proper to use the proverb in Para.2 quite clever.
You are good at using attributive clauses in your writing.
The “struck” sentence is perfectly used.
You’d better use “third person” in the first para.
It’s good to use the past tense in your writing.
2.佳句欣赏类评语
教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性符号（如E—Excellent）或标识不同星级等。
What a wonderful sentence using “cover”.
It’s really clever of you to use this beautiful sentence.
The inverted sentence is well wtitten.
3.谋篇布局类评语
A good beginning.
A perfect ending.
Well-organized. Perfectly-expanded.
The first para. makes a good beginning.
The last para. makes a perfect ending.
All the points have been covered.
It’s clever of you to use a topic sentence at the beginning of a para. It’s wonderful to use proper conjunctions between sentences.
You are good at developing para.
You have made great progress in developing passage.
I am glad to see the sentence conherence in your last para.
Better pay more attention to the relationship between sentences. It’s really wonderful to start/end your sentences with adverbials.
在起始年级应侧重对学生写作行为规范引领，重在对学生进行词语方面引导；对高年级学生则应侧重对文章结构、行文逻辑、句子变化等方面指点和引导。
虽然这些评语对我们大部分学生来说不太适合，以为他们连老师评他们什么都看不懂，但我们平时对作文批改确实没做到这么仔细，有很大启发。
英语作文批改评语 篇四
1、You are an honest and hardworking girl. You leave me
a very deep impression. No pains, no gains. I hope you will make more progress in English study in the future.
2、You are an excellent boy. I appreciate what you have done in your handwriting and believe you will be successful on your study.
3、You are a handsome boy. I enjoy your activeness on class. Wish you a glorious future.
4、You are an earnest girl and dutiful on your job. Thank you very much for your assistance on my teaching. I hope you can make more progress in your handwriting. Wish you a splendid future.
5、You are an active and passionate girl. I appreciate your participance in class activities. Wish you a happy life.
6、You are a very careful girl. Your handwriting is a marvel of neatness and order. I am sure there is nothing difficult for you to overcome.
7、You are a clever girl. I appreciate your handwriting so much. Wish you make more improvement on your study.
8、You are a humorous boy. You may have some difficults on English, I hope you will make more progress in later day.
9、You are a sunny boy. You are very active on class. Pay more attention on English grammar. Work harder and you will make more progress.
10、You are an open-minded boy. I enjoy your activeness on class. Wish you make more improvement on English study.
11、You are a hardworking girl. You have a gift for English study. Where there is a will, there is a way. Wish you a fantastic future.
12、You are a straight-forward boy. I appreciate your creativeness on class. I hope you can make more improvement on your handwriting in later day.
13、You are an earnest and hardworking girl. Your English is very good. I hope you can take part in more class activities. Wish you a terrific future.
14、You are a shy but hardworking girl. Try to be more active on class. Be confident, you are the best.
15、You are an honest boy. You are good at running and jumping. Wish you be a superstar in the near future on Olympics.
